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Fifty Sentences

A lot can happen

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  1. She couldn’t remember why it was so important.
  2. Tubes up her nose, into her veins, held her in place here.
  3. Here, Geoff could relax and he did, sitting by her bed being jovial.
  4. He seemed a little puzzled when she prodded him about what happened.
  5. She could afford to be patient now.
  6. His way of bending towards her, presenting his bald spot, seemed endearing here.
  7. When he pretended to get it, she knew how his mouth would form an O.
  8. Here, she could sleep and she did.
  9. Deep, drugged, untroubled sleep with nothing under it.
  10. The slow risings to consciousness didn’t hurt anymore.
  11. Nurse wanted to know why she didn’t ask about leaving; all the other patients did.
  12. Geoff did.
  13. Geoff was ready, he had places for everything and everything in its place.
  14. Except for her…until now.
  15. Her place was prepared and it was time for her to be put in her place.
  16. The ambulance drivers were rougher this time.
  17. It seemed that she’d floated out into the back of the ambulance before.

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